Snippet 5 - Hi peeps , hope youre all enjoying this novel, if you have any doubts please give any feedback

They banter as they see Tommy and Henry in the front walkway “oooh girls, you both look lovely”, the girls blush as they stare at their cool looking boys “you don’t look bad yourselves, if we must say”. Henry interlinks his arm with Summer and walks ahead, Tommy and Rachel follow behind at a distance. Lankan drives by Rachel’s house spying to see if he can spot Summer in the window but instead he spots Henry and Summer with interlinked arms walking together “right that’s it, I’m not having this”. He decides to let them have their enjoyment that night. He gets home in a rage but doesn’t show it to Kamila who has cooked Lankan’s favourite dish.

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